Saturday, January 19, 2019

My 1st Attempt (English 44)

Hello there!

Everyone always has his/her first attempt. At times, it isn't so successful. at times it is the only success. But most often than not, when diligence and patience are placed together in learning and acquiring a new skill, one gets to be good.
As such, you are encouraged to post your 1st attempt in our English 44 in the comment's section.

Let us enjoy this semester's journey together!

13 comments:

louie cristian simbajon said...

Oh wired crescent shaped entity,
bring me peace and drown me in deepest symphony.
Lively obstruct the echoing commotion,
you are an exemplarisch Panacea around these shrieking revolution.

Unknown said...

An epitome of imperfection, recondite by many
Indeed, a shrinking violet and that was me
Only you, accompanied me
You we're my voice that exhibit the images I have
Knows all my secret, my thoughts
And lay it all out to the world

Unknown said...

Jessa P. Escol

Unknown said...

Blank space and gapped
Not perfect yet still I smile and laugh
Now a girl very confident to have
Smile on, shine on, smile
Life when I was a child,
Full of happiness in her mouth

Unknown said...

I can go unaccompanied
Yet life is facile when I have my significant other.
Whether you have me or not,
You always have your concious
To steer yourself in any direction you want.

Peter James Solomon said...

Your beautiful wires that covered by snow
That the soothe flow and passes through
Be with me in my travel like no one do
I give you so much pain but you remain calm and useful though

Unknown said...

Excell L. Daguman

Xandrex R. Arellano said...

Your strong built held me in awe
That led me to empty this year round dough
This build that endures my bliss
That leads me to terrains with certain peace
You carried me through highs and lows
And sufficed my traveling woe.

Lori Mie Mahilom said...
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Lori Mie Mahilom said...

Living my life without you is a torture
To bring you everyday is my nature
Arrange in set for five decades
I hold you up for happiness
Everyday I recite
Ten times, ten times and ten times

Joyce Mae Betalac said...

When melancholic turns to affliction
I clutch you with a lot of question
When midnight seems so atrocious with whimpers
A massive rain falling in my eyes
I apprise you of my dolorous feeling
But you told me "stop crying I know you're grueling"

Precious Pearl D. Gomintong said...

White as snow, some might say
Never will you find me along the way
Molded and formed, years of patience
Priceless I am, in the sea I trance.

Liziel D. Alfeche said...

I am a trader
I am a pamphleteer
I love to wrote many politacal tracts
That make me feel more attract
Intellectuals and political leaders paid attention
Often was in trouble with the authorities including a spell in prison

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